The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownerships in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
This graph shows the vehicle ownership of the people from the year 1987 to 1999. As you can see, the ownership of vehicle was gradually increased over the period of time. During 1987 the vehicle ownership was very less. The graph shows that we have the ownership doubled every four year. In 1999 the vehicle ownership was at peak. We can foresee a huge rise in the upcoming years.
As the population increases the ownership of vehicle also gets increased in china. We can anticipate the growth will be double to the vehicle ownership in 1999 in next four years. Hence we can assume that the Return of investment will be huge on automation industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ehicle was gradually increased over the period of time. During 1987 the vehicle ownership was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e a huge rise in the upcoming years. As the population increases the ownership ...
^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e ownership in 1999 in next four years. Hence we can assume that the Return of invest...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 537.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 206.0 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66956521739 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38958040626 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 127.690721649 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 163.8 290.88556701 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9912260443 44.8134815571 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141197672068 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072105901592 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457776469491 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116550833668 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135009198113 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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