Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

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...and sporting occasions. All my knowledge , exposure and experience make me think ...
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...of incredible benefits which have always been required to get nations as well ...
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...ve always been required to get nations as well as world more calm and peacefu...
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... to get nations as well as world more calm and peaceful. Firstly, I strongl...
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...orld more calm and peaceful. Firstly, I strongly believe that sporting events ...
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... I strongly believe that sporting events have magical effects to reduce internat...
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...g events have magical effects to reduce international tension and they also mak...
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...magical effects to reduce international tension and they also make people releas...
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...ension and they also make people release their patriotic emotions in a safer way:...
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...a safer way: without giving any physical and financial loss .They enjoy the feel...
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...thout giving any physical and financial loss .They enjoy the feelings of being ...
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...ving any physical and financial loss .They enjoy the feelings of being victorious...
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...financial loss .They enjoy the feelings of being victorious and successful. A s...
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...thus, we are likely to have much unity. This very is the reason, the areas of th...
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...us thinking people. It has been observed richly ,the more people have exposure t...
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...ing people. It has been observed richly ,the more people have exposure to atten...
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... more they are likely to love cultural diversity which is of great importance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, similarly, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6567804424 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0885234888 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167515109423 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589514283 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592634933318 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878583947335 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083003953629 0.056905535591 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.