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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
The overwhelming majority of humankinds tend to survive by established rules, as they do not prefer changing own lifestyle. However, this attitude may be the reason of various types of issues.
First and foremost, people, because of their inertness, often do not perceive new ideas, discoveries and cuting-edge technologies, since it seems to them as something unknown, and usually society does not want to take risk by accepting disoveries. Moreover, a big amount of people are passive ones, appropriately, they have no destiny for learning and cultivation. Besides, usually, individuals and co...
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Sentence: First and foremost, people, because of their inertness, often do not perceive new ideas, discoveries and cuting-edge technologies, since it seems to them as something unknown, and usually society does not want to take risk by accepting disoveries.
Error: disoveries Suggestion: discoveries
Sentence: They prefer stable, but not very much profitable existance, rather than venturing by changing own work, as it inspires more confidence.
Error: existance Suggestion: existence
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 299 350
No. of Characters: 1513 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.158 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.06 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.808 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.38 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.036 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5