Young People enjoy life more than older people do
Young People enjoy life more than older people do
No matter how old we are, we can probably find something enjoyable in our life. In my opinion, young adults have more ability to enjoy their life than older people. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, young adults have more time to enjoy their life than older people. They do not have a lot of responsibilities like adults do. For Instance, as young people I do not have many burdens in my life, such as taking care of a family or a home, nor do I have a lot of work to do at an office. These are things that older people do. I have less responsibilities than my parents, so I can spend my life doing fun things such as playing games with my friends, going to the beach, and taking vacations. Moreover, I do not have to work to earn money or save money for future which are two more things that older people do. I do not have to invest money in property, stocks, or golds like older people usually do. However, if my parents want to choose movies, foods, or recreation places, they will prioritize their children's desires. They have a limited ability to enjoy their own preferences. Sometimes, they will forget about their own desires and prioritize their children’s needs.
Secondly, young adults have more energy to do activities than older people. Their bodies still can support their strenuous activities, such as playing football, basketball, and badminton, which are sports that older people may not be able to do. These activities require much energy and healthy bodies. For instance, my father who is above fifty years old is not able to play football anymore. His body has less ability to play this sport. In addition, he tends to get tired early because his energy quickly drop after several minutes. On the other hand, when he was a student, he could played football at night without feeling exhausted. He could spend many hours competing with his friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people can enjoy their life more than the elderly. This is because they do not have a lot of responsibilities like older people, and they have more energy.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 387.0 270.72406181 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68217054264 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51104032854 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475452196382 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 3.25607064018 584% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0926658658 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7826086957 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8260869565 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08695652174 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 4.33554083885 415% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484441984707 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161771455637 0.0996497079465 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172436538308 0.0662205650399 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.437614107201 0.162205337803 270% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.298418973213 0.0443174109184 673% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.42419426049 82% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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