Many people say that applying heavy taxes to industries will prevent industrial pollution. Others believe that there are other effective solutions to curb the industrial pollution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Include appropriate examples in your response, if necessary.
Nowadays pollution in many cities has sparked defined threshold level has signaled the authorities to take action on priority basis.To remediate this problem, some people believe that imposing heavy tax to industries is crucial and other people suggest for some more alternative which are better more suitable to remove pollution problems. In this essay, I will discuss both views which give a logical conclusion.
Firstly, Pollution in big urban cities has soared at such level that immediate attention and actions are required. Imposing huge amount of taxes to industries somehow it can reduce the bottleneck. However levying the taxes will rise the production cost, hence as a result increase in price of commodities. For example, implementing taxes on milk producing companies, steel industries. As an effect of rise in tax, they are going to charge it from public only. It is not effective solution because it would increase costs not environment benefits.
Secondly, There are numerous alternative which are very effective to such the pollution from societies of this world. Campaign can be held from local regime to literate the people for cultivate tree in huge amount. In addition, car pooling is best option to remove partially traffic as people going to office shared their car on rotation basis. There are many examples like switch off lights when it is not required, don't take printout unless it is mandatory. Hence these alternatives may affect our environment in better way to give fresh breath to next generation.
In recapitulate, instead of levy taxes, other solutions as discussed aforesaid are very effective and can resuscitate our environment and can give a better tomorrow to our child. I would recommend if every person cultivate a single tree in his life and nurture it , pollution problem can be solve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20677966102 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7444994461 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8565754032 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20064604866 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579928238622 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505063341046 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116198402338 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571911895145 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.