Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of
violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Justice and legal system are bedrocks of a harmonious society, without fear of consequences of actions, unprecedented growth of crime may occur. Harsh punishment such as capital punishment is necessary and justified in dreadful crimes. In absence of fear of gruesome punishment offenders would not fear while committing any heinous crime and other than justice would not be served to victims and their families leaving them dissatisfied. This essay shall discuss the vitality of harsh punishment such as capital punishment in controlling violence in society.
Punishment for severe crimes such as murder should be harsh, as it would serve as warning to general population that a heinous crime against society would be a punishable offence. Fear of consequences of actions is must for enforcing law and order. For instance, crime rates are comparatively lower than south Asian countries and this is due to the fact that law and order is strict among those countries, which make offenders think twice before acting.
Furthermore, serving perpetrators according to severity of crime committed will serve justice to victim and their families and is only justifiable. In the absence of such law, a wave of dissatisfaction may spread in population and they may lose trust in judiciary of country. Such chaos may provoke them to take law in their hands and hence spreading more violence. Lebanon is suffering from such deplorable condition where dissatisfied countrymen have revolted against government’s law and resulted in riots.
Opponents of this view state that serving capital punishment would not leave much space and chance for improvements for those who would want to change the path of their lives.
To sum up with, Capital punishment should be served to offenders who are guilty of committing heinous crimes. it would serve as warning to rest of population and would serve justice to victims
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31353135314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90578269493 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521452145215 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6342417715 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174097303248 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735596327948 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869658725241 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106142381219 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773658035607 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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