What is the most pressing problem faced by its inhabitants and plant and what’s the solution?
This issue raises a controversy about the most pressing problem faced by inhabitants and plant. The point of contention calls for it is analysis by various perspectives. However, it is evident the problem that inhabitants and plants suffering in these days is climate change.
At the outset, there are several reasons why it should be stated that climate change affect population and plants life now and on the future. The first being that animals that live there were extinct because the environment problems. Furthermore, a critical element of that is the ice problem at Antarctica. To cite an example on the matter fishing legal or illegal on Antarctic was a bad for the nature and we can see the impact now.
On the other hand, some people tend do believe that the climate change is related with problems in nature, where the man take three from the forest Amazon in Brazil. Correspondingly, it is a crucial note that the deforestation driven us for the climate problems likewise. Moreover, this idea is well supported by the fact that the deforestation and animal extinct need to be stopped. Thus, the solution is the man cannot that nothing more from the forest, they government should insert more legislation and penalties for the one that fishing, hunting and deforest the forest and the sea.
In conclusion, I firstly believe that the climate problem it is the tremendous problem in these days. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0534351145 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76151302703 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8934975921 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160036937698 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604349486449 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911037996493 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105199639109 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100414809609 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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