you have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. you find that you cannot continue the course.
write a letter to your teacher. in your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what actions you would like to take
Dear Ms. Najafi,
My name is Aidin Farughi. I am writing to inform you that I am not able to continue the course I registered for this quarter.
As you may know, I work full-time everyday from 9-17. After the work, I come to the institute to carry on the classes from 8 p.m to 10 p.m. Although I did my best to keep up with the work and the course, I failed to do so since holidays are coming up and I am forced to stay extra hours at work to finish the tasks.
At the moment, due to my busy daily agenda, not only am I not able to work properly owing to chronic tiredness, but I do not have the time to study and follow the lessons taught by you.
Consequently, I have decided to drop the course for now and start it over again another time. I suppose after the holidays the old of tasks to take care of at my career will be less, and I would be able to register again for the course.
I look forward to having you as my teacher again after the holidays.
Yours Sincerely,
Aidin Farughi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...r. As you may know, I work full-time everyday from 9-17. After the work, I come to th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, look, may, so, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11675126904 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21778038158 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9618224605 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1111111111 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239531772607 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103531130834 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696050012726 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134762543514 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355269589454 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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