Children nowadays are not healthy and fit as the past generation children. What might be the reasons? How can it be solved?
There are many reasons why our kids are not as healthy and as fit as we were in our childhood. Children today lead a sedentary lifestyle. They spend a great deal of time watching TV and playing video games. They also have to deal with tremendous academic pressure. Many of them attend the private coaching classes after regular school hours. The truth is that most children do not get an opportunity or time to engage in the physical activities.
Being physical active is absolutely essential for being fit. Now most households have computer and internet connections. Children as young as three or four spend hours playing games on their parents’ computer and smartphones. At an age when they should be running all over the place. As a result, they become couch potatoes. This stunts their physical growth.
Another reason for the health problem among young children is the excessive consumption of junk food.In many families both parents work. They do not get enough time to cook proper meals for their children, To compensate for that they stuff their fridge with the junk items. Therefore; excessive consumption of junk food leads to obesity which in turn will further reduce their inclination to play. Moreover, Junk food is not nutritive. It merely provides energy. If children do not get nutritious food , they will not grow into healthy adults.
Providing ample opportunities to engage in outdoor activities is absolutely essential to solve this problem. Parents should make sure that their children do not spend more than one to two hours a day in front of TV or computer. Schools, too, have an important role to play.They must make physical activities an important part of the curriculum. Extra marks should be awarded to those who perform well in sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01355932203 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62828067282 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9657399096 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2272727273 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4090909091 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179699081844 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501656973821 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575895623662 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111258468165 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028679618036 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.