You are planning to spend a weekend at a hotel with your family. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Include the following:
– when you want to arrive and leave
– explain the type of rooms you would like and ask how much they will cost
– ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to arrange our family’s upcoming visit to your hotel, as well as to ask for some additional information. Please allow me to elaborate.
We have decided to stay at your hotel for two days. That’s the 15th and 16th of April. We estimate to arrive at your hotel around 11am on the 15th and to leave at around 4pm on the 16th.
We would like to reserve two double rooms for four members of our family. Furthermore, although we are pretty sure about staying at your hotel, I would like to ask for your hotel’s rates during the weekend. You see, we have experienced some hotels before which double their rates on Saturday and Sunday for customers. Therefore, we want to make sure there is no unpleasant surprise when we reach there.
Finally, if you can also suggest to us some particularly unique sightseeing or local activities that we can participate in that would make our day.
I look forward to receiving your reply soon.
Yours faithfully
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-06-20 | Fahad Arif | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7816091954 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66297306625 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4043134792 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272823919495 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912899214212 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617016768398 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125142940844 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675785636551 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.