Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about methods by which illness can be dealt with. In my opinion, public money should be spent equally on the promotion of healthy lifestyle and the treatment of ill people.
On the one hand, everyone should be educated about how to practice and maintain a healthy way of life, especially from a young age. The government should use tax money efficiently by spending it on promoting a balanced diet and regular exercise. For instance, the authority can enforce more compulsory time for sport on school timetables. Additionally, annual conferences should be organized for experienced people to share and teach about how to keep fit physically and mentally. Living healthy can prevent unwanted illnesses, thus benefiting citizens as they do not have to spend a large amount of money going to the hospital. It is undeniable that healthy individuals can make the best contribution to the society.
On the other hand, it is the government responsibility to provide assistance for any member of its society, especially the sick ones. First, living unhealthily is not the only factor contributing to illness, as some people are innately prone to diseases. Furthermore, it is true that a number of illnesses such as cancer, asthma cannot be prevented nor treated by practicing a healthy diet and exercising regularly. Second, even though hospitals rely heavily on the government for money and resources, I think it would be immoral for doctors not to do everything in their power to treat ill people.
In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that the promotion of healthy lifestyle deserves more funding from the government, because I think that the treatment of ill people is equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18214285714 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92564095541 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7854350468 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343141125172 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111444103361 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713107029005 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21908879953 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354943503326 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.