What are the keys to a successful family?
What things can family do together to strengthen the family relationship?
Nowadays our lives are very intensive. Young couple need work full time job to get respectable salary. They come back home at the evening time without forces to anything, especially without patience toward their own children. That situation has negative effects on the whole family and on the relationship between parents and children.
There are few ways to solve the problem. One of them is addition of common activities. It can be any outdoor activity such a hiking, diving, camping, fishing, sport or travelling together. Or some indoor activities such a reading stories, playing table games, collecting puzzles or coins.
Addition way to improve relationship between parents and children is decreasing of time spend on watching TV and other media. The more free time you will have, as more you can dedicate it to your children.
However, if you don’t have enough time to spend with family, you can ask help from older generation. Usually, grandmothers and grandfathers very happy to feel we need them. Their experience and reputable age help them to be calm and patient to kids. In most cases children feel the relatives’ love and trust them even more than to parents. They tell them child secrets because they don’t afraid be fooled and betrayed. Time spend with grandchildren is nice and useful to both sides.
All mentioned above have surprisingly consequences. Members of the family begin to speak one to another. They have common interests and can share thinking and feeling. Without distraction of TV, computers and cellphones, parents can focus on the children. It is the best thing they can do for the successful family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... very intensive. Young couple need work full time job to get respectable salary. They com...
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Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[9]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'to': 'afraid to be'.
Suggestion: afraid to be
...m child secrets because they don't afraid be fooled and betrayed. Time spend with gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in most cases, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15185185185 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75458216579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6502730577 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2380952381 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112856535472 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343925364374 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596164087631 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660636422871 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645163600341 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.