Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but other say money is better spent in improving health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today modern world, the question whether funding of the art by government is essential or not causing controversies with different viewpoints. Although supporters of both sides have their own reasons and practices, I tend to be more convinced that the national budget should be spent on improving health and education instead of art. Below are my further discussion.
Firstly, among numerous reasons, the most significant one is that improvements in education can contribute directly to the development of nations’ economy compared to that of art. To be more specific, the more people receive ...
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Sentence: An example to illustrate this is that in developing countries or poor countries in Africa or Asia where residents have to face famine or fatal diseases, government funding should be used to take good care for public member's well-being like provide the wide application of preventative medicine such as vaccine or vitamin supplements.
Error: preventative Suggestion: preventive
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