Some people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, and others prefer to change their jobs from time to time.
Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Change is a perspective of life and transitions happen in each phase of life. There are some people who adopt similar work for whole life while others move from one job to another after some duration. In my opinion, I believe that change is essential in order to enjoy the life and sticking to only one type of job for entire life causes boredom so people should switch their profession from time to time.
There are many reasons that employees stay in same job all their life. Firstly, they get job of their own choice and are enjoying while doing the same kind of work so job satisfaction is the ...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...profession after some time. Beside that some of the workers are not happy with their curren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76103896104 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46950570453 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6036964264 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366044166181 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153871942491 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642022531847 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240869481952 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552840734879 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.