Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The main objective of each country is making progress in different fields. While many authorities argue that the main responsibility of governments should be economic growth, in my view, they need to attach an equal importance to other subjects too.
Many governments around the world are of the opinion that they only need to focus on financial issues as their most important duty. They assert that if councils set economic growth as the main goals, other progress will be possible too. In fact, politicians are able to cause a country earn a huge profit by their accurate policies towards other nations, such as persuading multinationals to invest in their countries. This can become an appropriate source of income to invest in a wide variety of other subjects like education. Proponents of this idea believe that making progress in other fields depends on being supported financially, meaning that economic growth, which is the first step and the most significant one, should be their main responsibilities.
However, the opposite group, including me, believe that other subjects can also be effective in the development of their country. They argue that if governments pay enough attention to other fields, such as tourism, this can lead to economic growth too. In fact, not only may tourist industry bring the fame for their country, but it can also be considered as an appropriate way to make job opportunities in the society, resulting in improving the quality of life. In addition, supporters of this argument believe that nations have several needs which are not associated to financial issues. The necessity of being reliable is an example, meaning that people in a specific country are required to be known by other nations positively. For instance, North Korea is a country where although is in a stable condition economically, its people are no satisfied as they do not have a positive international face.
In conclusion, although concentration on economic progress is a basic need which should be met, in my opinion other issues are also vitally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1449704142 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9119355624 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1776266773 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.214285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216014956469 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08011988737 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553666362516 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149268727987 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447803747955 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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