Many people are choosing to live their own.
What are the reasons?
Is this a positive or a negative trend?
Nowadays, most of people want to live alone and want to make their world very small. There are several reasons behind such as privacy and work busy. These occurrences have some pros and cons, we discuss both in this essay.
Firstly, current human being is very busy at work or business. In past, people used to have enough spare time to spend in local society event, but recent days citizens are spending their major time at work. So, they like to spend rest of time with their family only or to do privite works instead of with other events. Secondly, current generation is seeking for privacy, they don’t like if any body disturb their privacy. Consequently, there are starting their own life in new house. However, it has some advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand, the main problems is isolation, these people become saparted from others and won’t get any necessery help from other people. Sometimes, they are unable to spend time own family. For example, so many successful business people opned and botherd about their weak family relaionships.
On other hand, because of small and individual family, there are a plenty of positives. Firstly, they could minimize financial problems. Secondly, they could concentrate on particular goals and make plans to achieve. For instance, So many wealthy and successful familiars are small families.
To sum up, a coin should have both sides, same as individual life has both pros and corns, however, recent days mejority people are choosing own privacy life. As result, people isolated and not spening much time with local societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
Nowadays, most of people want to live alone and want to make the...
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Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...being is very busy at work or business. In past, people used to have enough spare time ...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...ng for privacy, they don't like if any body disturb their privacy. Consequently, th...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
...ecent days mejority people are choosing own privacy life. As result, people isolate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08365019011 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46916533633 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5508149753 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2777777778 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186869920205 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508283376202 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439090636636 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989522712168 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421287669764 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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