Airline companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets. Discuss whether this is positive or negative development. Give some examples based on your own experience.
It is quite true that the healthy competition among airline companies has forced them to reduce their air fairs in many countries. I vehemently deem that this positive trend for their holistic development as it can bring numerous benefits to the society.
Firstly, air travel can save the precious time, otherwise spent in travelling through other conventional modes as it is the fastest transportation medium. To illustrate, a businessman travelling from one part of the country to the other or to other nation for his business trips, can definitely save the travelling time by opting the Aeroplan. Secondly, by lowering the air tickets it gives the chance to people studying or working in other countries to visit their home and families more frequently. Thirdly, it has engendered the booming of tourism industry, bringing the economic growth to the nation. Therefore, it is crystal clear that bringing down the air ticket prices engenders the social and economic development of nation.
However, in this contemporary era the air travel is the expensive mode of transportation. Therefore, it is affordable by the poor and middle class people, so reduction in air fair could be restricted to only rich section of the community. Albeit, this drawback the burgeoning of aviation industry could indirectly benefit the economy of nation.
In short, from the above confabulation it is axiomatic that reduction in prices of air tickets could act as a boon for the holistic development of nation as it can benefit both socially and economically to that nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, as for, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21825396825 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95356212505 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4712045363 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721263050735 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312130744744 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382994551437 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500392902447 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508851950805 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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