Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below
The given pie graphs illustrate information on the percentage of women who went to higher education in the Someland between 1945 and 1995. The women's attendance is divided into seven different age groups which present from no schooling, third grade, year 6, year 9, year 12, to first degree and post graduate.
Overall, educated woman seemed to, and are predicted to, be more active to continue to study over fifty years. Moreover, all seven groups showed decrease number of women who had not an education. On the other hand the rose number of higher education gets its top.
To be specific, a larger percentage of women with no experience of school between 1945 and 1995 which was 35 and 0 percent went to, and are expected to, go to the first degree which was from 1 to 50 percent in 1995. Approximately 20% of the women have also attended the post graduate in 1995 which was 0 percent in 1945.
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