Many people believe that they should spend their money to enjoy life at present. Others, however, think that they should save it for the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether or not to save money for future is a topic of debate today. While some people argued that money should be used to make present better and convenient, others are in favor of keeping it for future needs. This essay will discuss why utilization of money for present can lead to better life but why money should be saved to avoid the uncertainty of life.
On one hand, there are various advantages if spending of money is restricted only to present. Firstly, a better present life can lead to healthy and developed future life. Secondly, a healthy and prosperous present life is responsible for increasing the efficiency of person. For example, a recent study suggest that people who are more focused for their present life have a better efficiency in their work. Therefore , it can be concluded that spending money for present can improve the efficiency and quality of life of person.
On other hand, life is not certain and there are arguments in favor of keeping money for future as well. Nobody knows the future and there must be financial backup to avoid the risk associated with the life. For example, a professor at university of London reveals that most of the people in India have a habit of saving the money for medical and educational needs for their family members. Hence, It is mandatory to save money in order to have risk free life in future.
Whether keeping money for future is important or not ? This essay discussed how usage of money can impact the efficiency but it is really important to avoid the difficult time in life. In my opinion, saving money is really important as it suggests the more safer and predictable life of future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not to save money for future is a topic of ...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tter efficiency in their work. Therefore , it can be concluded that spending money...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e money in order to have risk free life in future. Whether keeping money for future is...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
... is really important as it suggests the more safer and predictable life of future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74137931034 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45422294517 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6387635931 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29740593919 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118968063352 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045207122396 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198576205853 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334821288007 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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