In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books
There is a saying in India stating "Entire world is my family", so when a family faces a problem all the members of the family come together to solve the issue. So similarly today our family is facing many problems like terrorism, global warming, human trafficking etc. So it is our responsibility as member of the family to come together and solve this issues.
We all know this saying that "united we stand , divided we fall" so to stand against this atrocities we need to come together and save our mother earth.
Today's youth is the one who can stand against this evil section of the society and so as to outcast them from this world. But this youth needs to know the root cause of the problem , what the people's thoughts who are at receiving end of this problems. A kid in New York won't know the trouble a girl in Oman goes through to get a pot of water, or a women in London desnot the know the atrocities of Taliban's on a women in Syria.
For this we need to make youth aware of different cultures, traditions of different region,country and one of the best way to do so is by making them all work together to solve the problems. So idea of developing a Global University is one of a kind and can be game changer for the generations coming.
When people from different cast ,creed ,region, backgrounds meet a revolution is about to happen. When a person feels the pain by himself than only he can come with a solution that is bound make a positive change so when the students at this global university share their issues with other students , the one who don't about the issue will also feel some pain and in process come with the solution .
There have been instances when 2 or more countries come together something incredible has happened. For eg: the collaboration of all countries in making of WHO which works for the betterment of backward class of the world. PETA is another eg of such collaboration. Even now a days militaries of different countries are conducting drills for betterment of their defences. So when the bright young minds of all countries come together and a road map for the world's progress is made no section of the world , society will be left .
Terrorism is the greatest threat to today's world , Syria wars which started as a civil war against the autocratic government has now turned into a political circus, of which ISIS a terrorist group has taken advantage of and has hampered the world peace. So for this peace to get back in place, for the future of Syria world is part of this family we need to come together , ignoring our grudges . The development of Global University is the stepping stone for this amazing future.
Other biggest issue of humanity is global warming so as to counter this a global effort is needed or else our future generations will be deprived of fresh air and water.
So for our mother Earth for our family we need to come together and ensure the development of such global universities where students from different parts of world come together to learn , share and develop something incredible so that the peace is harnessed back in place and Earth becomes again place to live by.
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- All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems 50
- Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy 54
- In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books 16
- Critical judgement of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field. 58
- Students should memorize facts only after they have studied the ideas, trends, and concepts that help explain those facts. Students who have learned only facts have learned very little 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2603.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 564.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61524822695 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60443638909 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450354609929 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5972466533 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.952380952 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0254453917991 0.243740707755 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100238361794 0.0831039109588 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179368619235 0.0758088955206 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0135072522971 0.150359130593 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164233435142 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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