Whether parents should be held legally be responsible for children.
Parents should be held legally responsible for their children's act was always a debatable topic. Many people believe that children learn things observing their parents and they should be punished. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement they observe and imitate what they have learn from them. This essay would further analyze how parents are legally bound for kids acts with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, sometimes kids behave in an unacceptable manner which is not taught by parents. This situation leads to moot question that "who is responsible?". It is said that children are like a sponge, they absorb and imitate same like their parents. For example, in developing stage, a child learns language, culture, tradition and manner by observing his parents. So, if they speak in abusive way, it is most likely that child will observe and imitate the same thing. This example clearly shows that parents are responsible for kid's abusive language.
Moreover, it's parents duty to teach children social behavior and discipline. Say, for instance, if a kid goes to neighborhood house and brings couple of toys he liked, it's parents responsibility to teach him discipline and make him understand not to take anyone's anything without permission. This clearly exemplifies us that there is an obvious link between parent's teaching and children's acts. Thus, parents must be legally liable for their children's act.
These analysis proves that kids act in a way they are brought up by their parents and based on the things they are exposed to. In a nutshell, parents are solely responsible for kid's acts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...they observe and imitate what they have learn from them. This essay would further ana...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an unacceptable manner" with adverb for "unacceptable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... To begin with, sometimes kids behave in an unacceptable manner which is not taught by parents. This si...
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Message: Did you mean 'this analysis' or 'These analyses'?
Suggestion: This analysis; These analyses
...ally liable for their childrens act. These analysis proves that kids act in a way they are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16974169742 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70043142803 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5876997711 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5625 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358043946156 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133756543005 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150352157637 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220738932398 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117154769772 0.0609392437508 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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