Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
Many people opine that cheerfulness and joy could not be compared to money. The feeling of joyfulness relies on the state of mind and level of contentment of a person, hence a tedious task to define it. Humans should pull down the threshold level of contentment and look for even minute thrilling moments in their life.
Explaining the state of happiness for an individual person is a herculean task; everyone has a different measuring gauge for this state. For instance, a peasant feels delighted every time he is able to irrigate his fields on time, whereas a businessman is happy only when he manages to reap huge profit out of his business. Being happy is a state of eternal satisfaction that depends upon the vision and mission of subject. No single person could be able to define and measure it in a unique manner.
Acquiring the contentment lies in narrowing down the track of expectations and desires. Having an analysis of masses lying below our standard benchmark would give us a sense of gratification and keeps us pleased. For example, if a person seeking luxurious lifestyle analyze the strata struggling for even basic amenities would definitely cut-down his insatiable needs. Hence, human beings do have to search for happy events every other moment instead of waiting for a big blissful occasion that might or might not arrive throughout the life span.
To conclude, it can be advocated that although the state of being cheerful is hard to explain owing to difference in level of contentment and mind-set of people, a plethora of ways such as comparison with public a level below our self will be fruitful in achieving this goal, otherwise.
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that the discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 63
- People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 78
- Some people think that having a high number of young people graduating from universities is beneficial for a country. Others, however, believe sending a high number of young people to university leads to high levels of graduate unemployment.Discuss both s 61
- Some people think that having a high number of young people graduating from universities is beneficial for a country. Others, however, believe sending a high number of young people to university leads to high levels of graduate unemployment.Discuss both s 39
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a unique manner" with adverb for "unique"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92882562278 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7143718409 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9280735275 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151494372631 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560866190176 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539644194289 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876312964196 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300206765486 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.