Some people say that mobile phone plays a major role in their professional life. Others say it plays more important role in their personal life. Discuss both sides. What is your opinion?
There are different opinions in regard to the question of whether the use of smartphones is eminently more helpful in vocational activities or in private life. While some people believe that there are more benefits of utilizing these electronic gadgets for business purposes than for personal needs, others support the opposite view. The debate over this topic seems to consist of two irreconcilable camps. Both sides of the argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my own perspective is given.
From one point of view, mobile phones are immensely useful for workers and businessmen. In the first place, they are reachable by the press of a button regardless of their location. As a result, urgent issues can be solved quickly, which is usually required by competitive businesses. Also, one can store a large volume of electronic documents in on his or her smartphone, equipped with a high-capacity memory card. Therefore, important data can be viewed and sent promptly when necessary.
From another perspective, wireless phones are extremely popular among individuals for several concrete reasons. Many people use these devices to keep in touch with their relatives and friends with the help of voice calls, video chats and instant messaging. An illustrative example of this is that some people call their parents when they are driving their car or walking in a park. Additionally, a diversity of helpful applications is available on smartphones nowadays. They are increasingly being used by individuals in various ways such as navigating in an unknown neighbourhood and ordering goods from the Internet.
In conclusion, there are merits to both sides of the argument over whether mobile phones are more important for professionals than individuals. However, after analyzing the opposing camps, my personal view is that these electronic gadgets are certainly more essential in professional life; it is imperative that business people are available for advice and support at any time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...ere are different opinions in regard to the question of whether the use of smartphones is eminently mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in regard to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35220125786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94100989111 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8151319978 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184778197188 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052634628111 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504191389166 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111777891524 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444082078998 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.