You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent and you are having a wonderful time. You promise to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. Write a letter to your travel agent as promised and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.
Dear Mr. Smith
I am writing this letter to thank you for choosing a Kerala as a holiday destination for me. It was my dream to visit this place once in my life and you have made my dream came true. As I have promised, I am writing about the experience of the holidays and plans about what to do before returning back.
Firstly, I would like to tell you that my family and I are enjoying our trip to the fullest. The hotel you booked for us provided pick up facility from airport. Beside that accommodation is perfect and meals they are providing is hygienic and delicious. During the day time, we roam around the city. We become familiar to the culture and traditions of the place. We have visited temples, zoo, traditional restaurants, waterfalls and also heart shaped lake.
Also, I heard that Vayanad is a very elegant place to visit in Kerala. It is a great city to admire the beauty of the nature. I do not want to miss spectacular views of nature. So, I am planning to go to this place before the holidays end.
I will show you the pictures after returning back. Once again thank you for planning such memorable holidays.
Yours sincerely
Flora Thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...idays and plans about what to do before returning back. Firstly, I would like to tell you t...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
.... I will show you the pictures after returning back. Once again thank you for planning such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55660377358 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49955496217 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1169027862 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.375 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193798357119 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543723862214 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041099898079 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108305057465 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510962420405 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.