The table below show information about travelling to work in one US city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about commuters traveled to work in one US city, particularly each average of distance, time, and speed from forms transportation.
Residents who use common transport like bus or train and car with friends have enormous distance on average twenty three and 24 miles by take a hour min eleven minutes with average speed 28 mph or take forty two minutes with speed 34 mph. other than that, traveling cyclist and pedestrians is shortest than driver car without passengers, the bicycle and people who make away by foot just spend twenty minutes to take 4 miles with average speed 10 miles per hour or 3 mph whereas driver alone spend by a half hour to take 17 miles with usually speed thirty one miles per hours.
Overall for long distance is the quickest way to travel by driving car with passenger but for short distance walking or cycling is the best.
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Sentence: The table gives information about commuters traveled to work in one US city, particularly each average of distance, time, and speed from forms transportation.
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by take a hour min eleven minutes
by taking a hour min eleven minutes
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Residents who use common transport like bus or train and car with friends have enormous distance on average twenty three and 24 miles by take a hour min eleven minutes with average speed 28 mph or take forty two minutes with speed 34 mph.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 10
No. of Words: 154 200
No. of Characters: 714 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.523 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.636 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.365 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 29.364 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.541 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.879 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4