You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank’s head office. In your letter
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Hi Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concern on missing card. I have received envelop from the back yesterday, however I did not find card inside it. Bank representative we not available over phone yesterday, when i tried to connect with them.
It was annoying me a lot, because i was not able to contact bank through phone call.
My card was not there in the letter, so it would have been missed or taken by someone. I would request you to block my card immediately in order to avoid misuse of it. I was calling back representative to seek their assistance on this case, unfortunately i was not treated well. I am afraid, if bank will give me refund if the card was misused.
It would be grateful if you block all the transactions over my card. Please stop the transaction made by the card from any source like net banking and in store shopping. I was asked to acknowledge on receipt of my card, unfortunately i cannot give you that because i have not received it from you. Expecting your immediate attention. I will not be ready to pay any extra money charged if it was used by someone else. Quick response from you is essential. Please act swift.
Thanks,
Priyankaa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ot available over phone yesterday, when i tried to connect with them. It was ann...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hem. It was annoying me a lot, because i was not able to contact bank through ph...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o avoid misuse of it. I was calling back representative to seek their assistance ...
^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... assistance on this case, unfortunately i was not treated well. I am afraid, if b...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., unfortunately i was not treated well. I am afraid, if bank will give me refund ...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ge on receipt of my card, unfortunately i cannot give you that because i have not...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53240740741 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67119198718 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7141559383 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2666666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404271184448 0.216113520407 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116929267502 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879819157865 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224483775846 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809886360429 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.