Many people want to have a successful career and a happy family life both. What problems are involved in combining a career and family life? How to overcome such problems?
Most of the individuals dream about having a bright professional and joyful family life together. But, there are several issues in managing both career and family. Although, it does not mean that these difficulties do not have any solution. In following paragraphs, I am going ti describe the problems and their remedies.
One of the major issue is that employees have to work for longer hours in organisations and after returning back to home they try to spend time with their children, parents and wife. In this entire circle, they do not get time for themselves. As a result, people feel tired and get stressed out. In this manner, they are not able to provide their best to manage both the lives. Another reason might be that nowadays, workers are running after earning lots of money and it has become their career goal so that they can provide all the luxurious items to their dear ones. However, in this race, individuals forget about their family. Hence, they achieve success in their career but fails to provide real happiness to the family.
On the other hand, there are some solutions of above mentioned issues. In order to manage both the aspects such as career and family, people should do their jobs with full dedication and on weekends should spend valuable time with family without worrying about office work. Beside that employees should take long leaves once a year in order to go on a memorable trip with love ones. So, they can invest best time with their family and get refreshed. They can return back to office with fresh mind and do their best at work helping n achieving good career.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people should not waste their life by considering materialistic things as their career goal because parents, children and wife need them in their life but not the luxurious items. To have stability and happiness in life, workers should become satisfied with the things they have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ues in managing both career and family. Although, it does not mean that these difficulti...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...longer hours in organisations and after returning back to home they try to spend time with the...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'invest the best'.
Suggestion: invest the best
...rable trip with love ones. So, they can invest best time with their family and get refreshe...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...heir family and get refreshed. They can return back to office with fresh mind and do their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81681681682 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35765763853 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2775416219 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197442765125 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646634275317 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05613861086 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142997502736 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575508284677 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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