Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment.
What causes global warming?
What solutions are there to this problem?
Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our planet and it is often ignored or outright denied by many politicians across the world.
One of the causes of global warming might be the rapid industrialization of many developing countries. The hazardus waste from the large number of factories, little to no regulation in many countries and a lack of societal effort to protect the environment might be a serious threat to the ecosystem of those countries. The oil industry could be the largest offender to the environment with its fields, plants and the use of its products.
Another one might be the increasing number of people buying automobiles, especially in large cities. A large number of vehicles will produce a high amount of poisonous emission from those cars that adversely affect the air and cause air pollution. The automotive industry, alongside aviation could be the biggest reasons of air pollution.
One more cause could be the careless disposal of plastic waste into the ocean, disrupting the natural ecosystem of the aquatic life, endagering many species and even causing extinction. Oil spills are also one of the causes the ocean's pollution.
Perhaps, the largest cause could be war. Bringing catastrophic changes to the environment through destruction of the world's nature, use of weapons of mass destruction leaving damage for many generations and the production and use of military vehicles and equipment.
One might say the solution of such a big threat could be taxing the industrial sector and enforcing regulations to ensure the safety of the environment. Another is taxing the sale of automobiles and encouraging electrical means of transportation in favor of traditional petrol and diesel based vehicles. Governments should also ensure the safe disposal of industrial waste and place fines on companies not complying with these enviroment friendly regulations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...utomobiles, especially in large cities. A large number of vehicles will produce a high amount of ...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'oceans'' or 'ocean's'?
Suggestion: oceans'; ocean's
...l spills are also one of the causes the oceans pollution. Perhaps, the largest caus...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... environment through destruction of the worlds nature, use of weapons of mass destruct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32450331126 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96438813842 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7190210934 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 7.06120827912 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185273360721 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717069236275 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910771806403 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107361369547 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917798253986 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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