Write a letter to complain about a dangerous situation when some adolescents let their dogs run wild in public.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to bring your attention a dangerous incident that happened in our community last evening.
As you know, it is a regular practice for residents to bring their pets to the common play area every evening. It has been very fortunate that all tenants to date have been following the rules to ensure the pets are leashed at all times. However, there was a scary incident last evening when few youngsters brought their dogs into the play area and left then unleashed. It was very dangerous as there were toddlers and young children playing in the park during this time. Despite speaking to the youngsters, they did nothing to rectify their actions.
Being in charge of the property management team, we request you to look into the matter immediately. Hope you could take necessary measures to avoid such situation in the future.
Yours faithfully,
Sandra Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47835070606 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706666666667 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5964629185 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946516547736 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333960500505 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303460580826 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522644831532 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272469911978 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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