You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop
1- ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
2- Ask what the prices are
3- how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest to buy the new edition of Play Station i.e. PS 4 from your shop as your location is very near to my town.
Recently, it has been published that the new gadget of Play Station will be available in your town local market at the beginning of this Month. Could you advise if it is available now at your shop to come and buy it! otherwise I have to wait till you order it for me.
As far as I know, there are several models in different prices. Therefore, I would ask that you inform me which model do you have or can order for me to arrange the cash before the delivery.
I will be quite busy next week due to some earlier commitments with my family, so advise how long will you keep the Play Station for me if I make the order by now.
Look forward to receive your soonest reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y Station will be available in your town local market at the beginning of this Mo...
^^
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
...le now at your shop to come and buy it! otherwise I have to wait till you order it for me...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: otherwise,
...le now at your shop to come and buy it! otherwise I have to wait till you order it for me...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch model do you have or can order for me to arrange the cash before the delivery...
^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you have or can order for me to arrange the cash before the delivery. I will ...
^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
... make the order by now. Look forward to receive your soonest reply. Yours faithfully...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2619047619 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18100956465 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1491385558 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217164491996 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810999721061 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727116866738 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108389887388 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717144279336 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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