Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
International sports, occasions for different countries to interact in a very sportive spirit, are an area of deep interest for all nations and governments. It is believed that such events as Olympics and football world cup are imperative events to defuse the tension between nations, as well as boost the patriotism spirit between spectators who release it in a good manner. From my point of view, I profoundly agree with that international sports events eliminate the touches between countries which in conflicts. This essay will first suggest the effects of similar international occasions either on countries or individuals in addition to outlining the problem might be caused in some certain situations. Followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Recently, some countries look towards sports events as a chance to finish off any diplomatic problem between each other, similarly the individuals and supporters, who are affected by such political situations, look forward to live peacefully with their neighbors. For instance, Although North Korea and its next-door country i.e. South Korea were in conflict for several years, they participated in the Winter Olympics, and their players showed an extremely sportive spirit when they shacked their hands together after the match. This shows to the supports how such events are important to their future and next generations.
However, in some circumstances the wind does not be in favor of governments. Some individuals have more patriotism that is showing negatively where in Egypt football clubs supporters do sometimes a severe action against other team players during the match. For example, what happened in Cairo during the last football match in the Egyptian league, few supporters focused a laser beam to the other team`s players eyes. As result, different team spectators fought each other after the match which led to a lot of injuries and deaths.
To conclude, we can confirm that international events have far beneficial outcomes on countries rather than its drawbacks. I presume with more governmental organizing considerin more security, it would be with zero negative results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to living'.
Suggestion: to living
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'do'.
Suggestion: sometimes do
...here in Egypt football clubs supporters do sometimes a severe action against other team play...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed a laser beam to the other team's players eyes. As result, different team ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... each other after the match which led to a lot of injuries and deaths. To conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46546546547 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89521573739 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600600600601 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1443060616 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190830933717 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598309114856 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559016195665 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106022080944 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795888245971 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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