Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook,have had a huge negative impact on both individual and Society.To what extent do you agree
Most of individual assert that using of social networking site such as Facebook ,WhatsApp, Snapchat so on. Which have had a great negative influence on my face as well as society.This essay Accord with this statement in some extent
first and foremost, the excessive use of social networking site create many problem for people for example student most of the time spend on the site as result,they can distract from the study. Some individual are using this site in a wrong way. They make fake account on social site and cheat to others .Therefore this issue make a serious problem for individual.Moreover, Nowadays electronic crime ratio is also increasing . Few Masses post news with this, They hack to others one's social account consequently, This matter disturb to People's life .
on the other hand, by the help of the sites.Individuals can communicate with others and they can know about other people.Social site are helpful for masses in many ways. People can use this site for entertainment or share their feeling with others and these are also helpful in business because,Businessman promote their product and aware about their business to others. So, It has a great impact also
conclusion, it is it truly said that "every coin has two sites" similarly,Social site have positive and negative side also.People should use the site in a limit and do not use in wrong way so that other people cannot face difficulties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07594936709 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06957880419 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.596407668 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.375 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213488172506 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103898903538 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655536624126 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143859194625 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605513864905 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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