The diagram below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided chart gives information on number of new houses built per years per years in two different cities namely Derby and Nottingham. The data are referred from 2000 to 2009. It is clear from given graph, the most of houses were built in Derby during the period mentioned before.
In the beginning of 2000, just below than 50 houses were built repectively in Derby and Nottingham . However, by 2002, Nottingham had a decline of new houses and nearly 25 houses were constructed. From 2000 the constructing of new houses went up in Derby and this kept increasing till 2008.the number of new houses remained constant in Derby between 2003 and 2007, approximately 125.
As is presented in graph, Nottingham, in 2006 and 2008, constructing of new houses fell dramatically reaching around 5 houses per year. However,by 2009, Derby and Nottingham, had their highest number of new houses respectively 350 and 250.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'per years'.
Suggestion: per years
...formation on number of new houses built per years per years in two different cities namely Derby an...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the houses') or simply say ''most houses''.
Suggestion: most of the houses; most houses
...2009. It is clear from given graph, the most of houses were built in Derby during the period m...
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Suggestion: .
...uilt repectively in Derby and Nottingham . However, by 2002, Nottingham had a dec...
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Suggestion:
...ottingham . However, by 2002, Nottingham had a decline of new houses and nearly 2...
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...003 and 2007, approximately 125. As is presented in graph, Nottingham, in 2006 ...
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Suggestion: , by
...aching around 5 houses per year. However,by 2009, Derby and Nottingham, had their h...
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..., had their highest number of new houses respectively 350 and 250.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01973684211 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76247225088 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5013844694 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335684848241 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160897505708 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762280032029 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244052934969 0.12726935374 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439477020644 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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