discuss both sides space travel v/s current crucial problems faced by human being.
In present scenario numbe of problems are faced by population related to their daily living. There is need to rule out that once, but it is generally seen that more emphasis in put on space travel. This essay will discuss both the sides with different views and examples in upcoming paragraphs.
There is various reasons that supporting farmer one. The most preponderant one is that space travel provides lots of information, which is help in various fields. For example weather forecasting through a plethora of satellites that are placed over different planets provide solution to number of issues.. Furthermore, this field provides opportunity to talented youngster to work and to contribute their efforts in exploration of different things. For instance, when astronauts travel to space, then they get new knowledge and better exposure to unique things.
On the other side, there is countless dangers faced by society in current time. The most one education that is most necessary for new generation to grasp knowledge. It plays very imperative role in life, as career is based on it. Adding on it, health status of masses is also deteriorating day by day, which needs better health treatment and medication. So, there is need to address these problems that I listed above.
To conclude, both sides that I discussed in essay are crucial once, so these can be not ignored at any cost. There is need to spend time on both one with great efforts, as these are important indicator of nation development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68551373111 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1367344726 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244615550253 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684236382305 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677028490483 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139510417197 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647889359138 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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