The given diagram shows the natural water purification system

Essay topics:

The given diagram shows the natural water purification system.

Submitted by Harjeet on Fri, 06/08/2018 - 04:29

The given dramitacally chart reveals the information about by the natural water purification system. It is a clear and coherent representation.

It can be seen that, in which process have ten stages were be divided with the help of transpiration and condensidation water. In the process has big tunnel then two plants were grown their left and right in their container as well as tunnel have been outside their mud. After they were covered with trench inside the whole process it.

Nextly, in the tunnel have been centre the container as well as upper the container coverd with plastic sheet and in this sheet had been sitting their three stones were be divided into left side, right side and upper their container have one more stone in centre side.

Overall, sun produced the heat with stemps and provide the little amount of water and after filled their contained with the help of pure water. So in this process main reason have produced their pure water.

Votes
Average: 6.5 (5 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-07-08 Jarneet kaur 78 view
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
..., in which process have ten stages were be divided with the help of transpiration ...
^^
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tunneled', 'tunnelled'.
Suggestion: tunneled; tunnelled
...nsidation water. In the process has big tunnel then two plants were grown their left a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and right in their container as well as tunnel have been outside their mud. Afte...
^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as tunnel have been outside their mud. After they were covered with trench inside th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ad been sitting their three stones were be divided into left side, right side and ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37281821878 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0949653476 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122023762907 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790638188863 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137786682406 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12172213495 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145759771388 0.0819641961636 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.