You had recently joined a morning course but now you can’t continue as you have got a job. Write a letter to the course instructor explaining why you can’t continue the course, how it can be difficult for you to manage your job and the course etc.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am student of morning English class and writing this letter to inform that I would not be able to continue the class owing to job which I joined last week.
Last week I got the job offer from multinational company for warehouse supervisor role and because of immediate requirement, I was asked to join in the same week on Thursday 21st march 2018. Since my placement is in warehouse which is outside the city near to river bank, it takes at least one and half hour from town and In order to get in time, I start from home around 7:00 am.
I am very keen to complete this advanced English course but it appears that I may not be able to manage both as the classes finish around 8:00 am morning and by that it would be too late for me to depart for office. I tried to find out the other options like evening classes after 6:00 pm but I was informed that jobs is in shift and I may have to work in evening shift as well. Considering all the approaches, I decided to discontinue the class and concentrate on job. I would not ask for fee refund, nevertheless, I expect to adjust in future if I get chance to join the course again.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
PAJA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that I may not be able to manage both as the classes finish around 8:00 am mornin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37739994725 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588744588745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5146765199 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169693337328 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676304158054 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452997666506 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106909006704 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438516442456 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.