Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers not people .why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development ?
As we know , science is consider as a boon for us. There is no doubt, in case of future scientists predict cars, which will be driven by electronic appliances that is computer not human being just because of technology. It is a positive development. My clumb of writing will discuss my views in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are numerous causes behind in this problem. First and foremost , computers are very advance as compare to individual. Moreover, it is very beneficial for everybody. Because, it will decline the traffic congestion . If traffic is decrease pollution will automatically drooped by large amount. Secondly, it is very essential for old persons. Generally, we see mostly old humans are not able to doing work. For instance, handicape people they are preying of harmful diseases.
On the flip side , there is no denying , in present time approximate all the youngsters are not following the rules regarding driving. However, a few young generation have not driving licence. But , they are driving at very high speed especially during cars cases . As a result, nowadays accident cases are increasing day by day . In addition to, everyone has its hectic schedule and approximately masses are doing jobs as well as business . They provide all facilities regarding driving cars. They do not aware about there result?
According to my point of view, it is positive development . Because it will also decrease the harmful problems which is created by masses .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12345679012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84658737897 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6099384469 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2857142857 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5714285714 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195932262605 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451130183021 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606564568412 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114430040755 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722372039274 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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