Some people think using cars for city travel is best option and others think using bicycle is the best option. Discuss both sides and give your option.
In recent times travelling within city is becoming tedious because of increasing traffic. Few people think that using car for city travel I'd good option while others argue that using bicycle would be a better option. This essay agrees to the fact tht using car is a better option than bicycle. This essay will discuss both the views.
On the one hand, people believe using car seems to be a best option for city travel. This essay agrees to this view. Usuage of car which was once seen as a luxury, has now become affordable to all because of the increase in the number of manufacturers and readily available financial support from financial institutions and banks. With this changing environment cars are seen in garage of many houses. This had lead to increased usuage of cars for daily travel. For example, in a metro city like Chennai where extreme temperatures are seen using a bicycle would lead to dangerous health issues.
On the other hand, people argue that using bicycle is best option for daily travel. This essay disagrees to this view point. Although using bicycle will help to keep yourself bodily fit it cannot be used as daily means of transportation. In today's fast moving world where time I'd considered as money, using bicycle which is time consuming can't be seen as a good option. For instance, in a city like Mumbai where we need to travel about 30 kilometers on a daily basis for work usuage of bicycle is practically not possible.
To conclude with, although usuage of bicycle seems to be a good option to keep ourselves fit it still can't be used as daily means of transportation. Car seems to be a better choice for daily commutation. Increased usage of cabs is evident for this. However government is also encouraging car pooling in order to decrease the fuel expense and usuage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, still, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75873015873 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51687376822 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4636396131 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8947368421 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05263157895 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402627468317 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137444741617 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152047318254 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278229503912 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111314009143 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.