when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ny technological devices emerge quickly everyday. For some people, they would like to bu...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...will plunge a lot after a month when it come out. For example, when the iphone 4S fi...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
...und 5000 RMB in China. But just after a few month, the price is much lower, only approxim...
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Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...l want to try the technological device. Whats more, the quanlity of the device will n...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...to buy later after the devices come out.When a lot of people have adopted the techno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48895027624 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50821579717 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447513812155 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7769110857 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5625 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415524936703 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142381538896 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794337018429 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240564855761 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880175418959 0.0645574589148 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Nowadays, technology is developing rapidly and so many technological devices emerge quickly every day. For some people, they would like to buy the new devices as soon as they are available. However, I agree more with the people who wait for a while until other people adopt them.

The first concern to wait and buy the new technological device is the economic issue. If we buy the new device later, we can save enormous money. It is a common sense that the new technological device is extraordinarily expensive when it first comes out, but its price will plunge a lot after a month when it comes out. For example, when the iphone 4S first was available to the public, the price of one phone is around 5000 RMB in China. But just after a few months, the price is much lower, only approximately 4000 RMB. And now after several generations of iphone, you can buy an iphone 4S with just 2000 RMB. So, waiting a while after the new device is available will save a lot of money for the people who are not very rich but still want to try the technological device. What's more, the quality of the device will not decrease as the time pass by.

And there is another advantage to buy later after the devices come out. When a lot of people have adopted the technological device, there will be many experiences for you to use the technological. If you buy it later and find some problems or questions with the device, you can just go to the internet, there will be some people who already asked that question, and the answer is just right there for you to take. If you buy the device too early, you may not take advantage of that experience.

Although I admit that buy the technological device as soon as it is available can bring more fun and challenge for the people to use and discover the wonderful power of it, the price and the energy are not worth with that advantage.
And if you buy later, you will save more money and energy without lose the quality of the new technological devices.