when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more?
In the digital days, technology is developing rapidly and a variety of tech gears emerge quickly every day. For some people, they would like to buy the new products as soon as they are available. However, I agree more with the people who wait for a while until other people adopt them.
The first concern to wait and buy the new technological device is the economic issue. If we buy the new device later, we can save enormous money. It is a common sense that the new technological device is extraordinarily expensive when it is first brought to the public attention, but its price will plunge a lot after short while when it comes out. Let's say when the iphone 4S first was available to the public, the price of one phone is around 5000 RMB in China. Just after a few months, the price is much lower, only approximately 4000 RMB. Now after several generations of iphone, you can buy an iphone 4S with just 2000 RMB. Waiting for a while after the new device is available will save a lot of money for the people who are not very rich but still want to try the technological device. What's more, the quality of the device will not decrease as the time pass by.
There is another advantage to buy later after the devices come out. When a lot of people have adopted the technological device, there will be a wide range of experiences for you to use the electronic gadgets. If you buy it later and find some problems or questions with the device, you can just search on the internet. There will be some people who have already asked that question, and the answer is just right there, brought to our fingertips. However, if you buy the device too early, you may not take the advantage of that experience.
Chances are that some die-hard fan for electronic gadgets may want to keep up with the newest products. Buying the technological device as soon as it is available can bring more fun, satisfaction and challenge to them when discovering the wonderful power of the devices. However, for the common people who are not zealots of those technological gears, the fun of using them quickly doesn't come close to the money they save and the convenience of experience that other people who adopted the machines have offered. In the meantime, even if you buy later, you will not lose any of the quality and property of the new technological devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1373.03311258 140% => OK
No of words: 421.0 270.72406181 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57482185273 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53737972712 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458432304038 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 419.366225166 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6993161874 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 7.06452816374 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399075651997 0.272083759551 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119622843096 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751970631365 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25379193785 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306003108407 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.2367328918 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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