when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more?
In digital days, there are tech gears emerging rapidly generation by generation. When it comes to the issue whether buy the technological device as soon as it is brought to the public, people always have different standpoints and perspectives. Some people may would like to buy it immediately, while the others support the opposite, waiting until others adopted it. As far as I'm concerned, I prefer the latter. Among the countless factors contributing to my position, the following are the primary ones on which I'm going to elaborate further more.
Admitting, for the died-hard fans of electronic gadgets, buying them as soon as they come out may have its own merits. First of all, they can get more fun, satisfaction and challenge from discovering the magic of the devices. Moreover, this behavior may bring more attention to them from the people around them. Let's say if you are the one who always use the most new i-phone, you colleagues or classmates may admire you and think you are cool. Quite appealing, right? However, when taking more factors into deliberation, disadvantages exceed the benefits you can earn from it.
Although I have mentioned many seemingly profound advantages of buying devices immediately, there lies some intrinsic problems in it. For instance, the products are always extraordinarily expensive when first brought to the public attention. And you may spend a lot time to figure how to use it. While if you buy them later, you will not have as much concerns.
In comparison to buying a tech gear as soon as it is available, buying it later will save a lot of money for you. Take the i-phone for example again, when the i-phone 4S came out in 2010, it cost almost 5000 RMB. While just after a few month, the price dropped to 4000 RMB. You can just wait for little while to save 1000 yuan for yourself without losing the quality and property of if.
What's more, a wide range of experience will be brought to you fingertips if you wait until many others have adopted the device. When you have a problem with the machine, you can just search on the internet, the answer will just right be there since some people may have already encountered the same trouble with you. Since you needn't to figure out the problems by yourself, you may save innumerable time and energy taking the advantages of others' experience.
All in all, because of the above reasons, I prefer to buy a new technological device until many others adopted it.
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- when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82588235294 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62992730832 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8496178683 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1739130435 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451385870938 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118327153605 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115243395092 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244473423633 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083375028647 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.