It is said that adulterated food is key reason Behind deteriorated health of all age group masses.How far you agree or disagree with it ?
Food adulteration is an addition of an another food substance to a food item in order to increase its quantity.For instance,the give topic asserts that behind every deteriorated health of all age group;adulterated food responsible? As I completely agree to the question,I will shape my opinion by giving examples and assentions.
Firstly,there are three types of food adulteration ;intentionally,unintentionally and natural adulteration.All of them has a huge effect on human body.Moreover,if we talk about the products which are having noxious effects one of them is milk.Similarly,water is adulterated into milk to make its quantity in bulk.There are many effects of this happening to a human body which are;Memory loss,heart diseases and eye loss,etc.
secondly,as we all know that people from countryside area are less affected from food adulteration where as people from cities are suffering more.Further more,people in villages are not dependent on packaging food products as much people of cities.Similarly,people who drink or eat package products are suffering from adulteration as well.For example,in India,coffee powder that we get in packing is usually adulterated by tamarind seeds,chicory powder to add black colour.It's harmful effect is that it causes diarrhea,stomach disorders,giddiness and severe joint pains.
To conclude,As we have seen that food adulteration have alot of negative effects.So i tend to believe that government should ban food adulteration and stringent laws should be made,Because food is the basic necessity of an individual's life.Food should be pure,nutritious and free from all type of adulteration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80991735537 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.1680103928 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.664808733 49.4020404114 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.2 106.682146367 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.4 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19671826639 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110587696202 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900244288818 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124925763107 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866372653887 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.6 11.3001002004 227% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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