Some people think that government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and the homeless? Do you agree or disagree?
In this inflation era, the ratio of underprivileged people is surging at an alarming rate. Few people claim that the state authorities ought to take responsibility of such necessitous populace. I completely agree with this statement and my viewpoint will be discussed hence forth.
Firstly, government is being appointed by its citizens and for their welfare. Such federal body must look into the lacking areas of unemployment and generate jobs for their people. Unemployment causes frustration among individuals which likely deflect them and might get involved in illegal activities to earn bread and butter. To illustrate, recent survey conducted by Human Rights found that 39% of criminals are well-educated who does not own a job. Hence, it is the prime duty of the government to look after the poverty-stricken people and meet their necessitous demand.
In addition, homeless is another burning issue which is increasing rapidly and government should introduce some programs to provide them loan at subsidized rate so that the burden to payback the loan could be balanced due to less interest rate. Without shelter, people feel less secured and easily fall prey to heinous crime. For example, Females are kidnapped during night time who are residing beneath the bridges in the form of shelters. Therefore, federal bodies should take care of this issue on priority for the betterment of their people.
To conclude, in my opinion, government assistance for the welfare of the disadvantaged people will help to decrease the crime rate and make the society a better place to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, look, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25098039216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87613307829 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6135278128 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241724421647 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717174453914 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477753578058 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132609191251 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209707890288 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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