The diagram show the stage and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concerte for building purpose
The given graphical representation reveal the information about the process of the cement and concrete manufacturing by some necessary equipment and materials it is disnict into four steps it is clear and coherent representation
To begin with the process of cement production of material used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher for crushing after that powder the materials into which mixture furthermore induce into the rotating heater for rotating process moveover take before the blend is actually dropped on grinder while the product obtained from the process cement as a by product
Secondly in concrete production mixing the all mixer ;sand,clay.however into four stages in a beaker after that due to this process concerte product also obtained from it
Overall it is the evident of cement and concrete manufacturing;four stages ,and into concerte process it in clock wise direction takes place in. However, it is by product obtained from of cement and concrete.furthermore , by manufacturing in container of steel .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , clay
...t production of material used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher f...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ction of material used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher for crushi...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'introduced'.
Suggestion: introduced
...ial used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher for crushing after that po...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , clay
...te production mixing the all mixer ;sand,clay.however into four stages in a beaker af...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t and concrete manufacturing;four stages ,and into concerte process it in clock wi...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from of cement and concrete.furthermore , by manufacturing in container of steel ...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., by manufacturing in container of steel .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51875 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39324867414 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 16.3608247423 324% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.709488133 44.8134815571 455% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.333333333 76.5299724578 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.3333333333 16.8248392259 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6666666667 4.34317383033 614% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191172913926 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127887081142 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359644431395 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123575414974 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369211071085 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 8.37731958763 372% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 70.7449484536 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 7.45979381443 353% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 8.71597938144 179% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 7.59969072165 141% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 8.62886597938 336% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 8.54432989691 272% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.