Cultural Shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the few possible options to eradicate this?
Many people migrate to other countries to have better opportunities and then they came across with cultural shock as the new country has different culture, customs, and traditions and this has become the biggest issue for few immigrants which seem a small issue at the beginning but it can lead to many issues. This essay will discuss the few possible options to eradicate this and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, the first and foremost possible solution is that when immigrants are planning to move new country, then they should do little research and have sufficient knowledge about the culture of the new country. Host country should give sufficient time to immigrants to get accustomed to the new culture and remain patient. For example, Australia seems the most welcoming country for immigrants and that increased immigrant’s rate in past few years. Therefore, immigrants and host country both should give time to each other to mingle.
Furthermore, both should have equal respect for the new culture and diversity. When a person accepts that there is a difference and accepts it then the integration process becomes easier for each other. For instance, India is most diverse country and accepts the immigrants with wide open arms with their difference and diversity. Thus, the mutual respect must be maintained among immigrants and the natives.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that the best way to overcome cultural shock is to start learning about the new culture before moving there and accepts their different and diverse culture with mutual respect. In my opinion, these small steps can be beneficial for both in integration with the new culture.
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| 2018-06-27 | Manisha Verma | 75 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2202166065 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68592542991 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516245487365 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4491049545 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257656577102 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988091175375 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820014792146 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166350590632 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786020064626 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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