The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This graph reports the consumption of fish, lamb, beef, and chicken during 25 years in a European country, and it can be seen that every meat has fluctuation development from 1979 to 2004.
In the first year, beef and lamb decreased rapidly around 25 gram each others, but beef consumption increased in the end of first year, then it showed fluctuation movement until 1989. From 1989 onwards, beef declined fluctuating until 2004. On the other hand, lamb also dropped until 2004, but ever reached significant development in 1988, 1997, and 2003 although in general it still decreased.
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Sentence: In the first year, beef and lamb decreased rapidly around 25 gram each others, but beef consumption increased in the end of first year, then it showed fluctuation movement until 1989.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and others
Sentence: In summary, it can be clearly seen that only chiken which always rose and other meats, such as beef, lamb, and fish were decreased every year in a European country.
Error: chiken Suggestion: chicken
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