Many people suffer. from insomnia. What do you think is it caused by increased pace of life or the individual life style is at fault
With the rise in modernization .A man has transferred his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on moon . nevertheless , there are some issues which are irrevocable and complex through this essay .with the example and assertions into this topic.I shall explore my point of view into this during following paragraphs.it is clear and coherent representation.l properly agree to this statement.
Following to this, the people lived nearest to pollutant places.after that different types of disease also develop into their city by some hygienic conditions.however, the one of the most commonly disease is insomnia.afterthat, people unable to do any work because suffering from disease.moveover , the insomnia is common disease that spreading into every field frequently.for example, sleeplessness also due to it .after that , person not gain desired sleep according to their requirements.as well as, the body of people unbalanced through insomnia.
Secondly , the insomnia is cause of pace life , hustle- bustle life of everyone.afterthat , people influence about their personal , professional life. However , through it person suffering from various disease. For example, cognitive is means lack of concentration or slowing in activities.however, people not think properly according to their understanding.moveover , person created mixture of thinking that not solved by properly concentration.furthermore , insomnia has so many effects that totally harmful to everyone.
In summary that I shall explore my point of view into on paragraphs with example however , it is variable from person to person because person suffering from it into sensitive conditions and there way of thinking different from other ones.moveover either they treatment develop or people also free from this condition easily . After that , every people awareness about this disease some suitable steps take up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79225352113 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67856414265 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.654609465 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.777777778 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228563828897 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10068870188 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840003974578 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141256823755 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868018897094 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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