The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The climate graph shows the number of temperature and precipitation in Kolkata during a particular period of a months. The the data is calibrated in Celsius and millimetres. Which is clearly and coherently.
It can be seen that, The temperature of the Kolkata has been increase first three months of the year. However, and the middle of the Year Kolkata temperature has 30 degree Celsius. Lastly, October, November and December is decreasing temperature in that months. Moreover, in the months of july, August and September has 35, 34 and 30(°c) respectively.
As far as, trend is concerned that the rainfall of the Kolkata a year. The first five months of the year precipitation has been up month by month. Moreover, middle of the year rainfall is upto 250 millimeters. Futhermore, last three months of the year precipitation has been down in millimeters.
Overall, It is evident that in beginning months and last months of the year has minimum rainfall as compare to middle of the year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a month' or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: a month; months
...n Kolkata during a particular period of a months. The the data is calibrated in Celsius ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
...during a particular period of a months. The the data is calibrated in Celsius and milli...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
...during a particular period of a months. The the data is calibrated in Celsius and milli...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, moreover

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96987951807 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95576940867 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475903614458 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6465018191 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.75 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266101437167 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993753804967 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617242022865 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164741131591 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253625034209 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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