You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to beshared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on the degree at which information is circulated. While a number of people are convinced that in the spheres of scientific research, business and academics, the more information is shared the better, others believe that certain key information should be secured from general viewing. This essay aims to discuss both views and present my personal account.
On one hand, there are sound reasons why sharing of information should be facilitated as much as possible. Firstly, it helps organisations to keep updated with the most cutting-edge methodsapplied in different work contexts. For example, the publication of novel laboratorial procedures on the Internet helps to heighten the quality of research-oriented experiments in facilities across the globe. Secondly, increasing the circulation of information wll also induce a sense of positive competitiveness to produce better results. For instance, as news of Adidas’ newest shoe technology Boost made headlines, its rivals such as Nike or Underamour have been boosting research and experimentation to introduce footware offering higher degree of comfort with innovative designs and materials.
On the other hand, that certain vital information needs to be kept under limited access is also justifiable. To begin with, this helps to maintain the competitive edge for leading players. A good example here is that the most sought-after training programs in Harvard university are accessible only the students there and a multitude of measures have been taken to ensure the content is not plagiarized or stolen by anyone. In addition, if vital information is compromised, damage in many aspects will be inevitable. Take Adidas’ new material as an example. If their secret formula were revealed and used by their competitors, they would lose their market share, which could result in financial loss worth billions of dollars.
IN conclusion, I personally take the view that while information should be shared as much as possible, it is understandable that certain strategic data needs access restriction.
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| 2019-06-18 | Mohammadjavad | 56 | view |
| 2018-07-01 | n0air9x9 | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58307210031 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19544159462 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633228840125 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5305784536 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.733333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194090220061 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608687964166 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656301467479 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126846805061 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638510349799 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.