Write a letter to the hotel manager about a bad experience you had while staying there. Include the following in your letter:
– Where and when did you stay?
– What had happened?
– Suggest a solution for the situation.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to appraise you with the problems i faced during my stay in you hotel and it was quite disappointing. I stayed in your Saraoh Hotel which is in Chandigarh sector36-c during my business trip. My stay was of one week from 1 July to 7 July.
During my stay faced several problems. Firstly, When i entered the room i switched on air-conditioner as it was quite hot i realized that it was not cooling at all. I immediately made call to reception regarding this problem and request them to shift me to another room. But they told me that there is no vacant room at the moment. I had to suffer for two days before i get shifted to another room. I could not sleep whole night due to very hot temperature which frustrated me a lot. Another problem i faced is the quality and standard of food which i think was not up to mark. I think i was even served stale and low quality food because of which i experienced frequent stomach upset issues.
I think you should hire permanent technician which keeps a regular checking of electronic appliances so that guest that choose your hotel to stay will not have to suffer and take a positive experience about you hospitality and services. Also there is need to inspection at regular intervals of food quality items and staff is following guidelines properly while making food so that people get maximum out of the money which they are paying. I think I am also entitled to get refund for the inconvenience i faced.
Hope you will take required actions to further problems.
Your faithfully,
Anonymous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60498220641 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66928112782 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0672529163 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181356923467 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566504722044 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588586274594 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111332941065 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598169870513 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.